(Team Sci Fi) [Cafe] Flip the Tables

[aythli]

Title: Flip the Tables
Prompt: [Cafe]
Rating: T
Warnings: None
Summary: Fai never expected to find himself playing a café-themed, rom-com game as part of his job. He never expected to find a sword-wielding character in that type of game either, but this was apparently a day for surprises.
Notes: Even though this is a last-minute sub for the café theme, I had a great deal of fun writing it. Massive thanks to Cloverfield for beta-ing.

( Flip the Tables )

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Comments

[missmarjoram]

1. 7 -- I had the same concerns as another poster who commented that the cafe wasn't an entirely essential part of the fic, but I still loved it!

2. 9! I'm not sure if it's on my end because I'm slightly exhausted, but there were a few parts where I lost track of what was going on. (I'm pretty sure this is me though, to be honest?)

3. 10 -- I loved it I would love to see more of this. I love virtual reality and you've got a lot of cool things to work with here.