(Team Sci Fi) [Nightlife] Tactile Tequila

[badluck_koi]

Title: Tactile Tequila Prompt: [Nightlife]
Rating: M Warnings: Alcohol Use, Language
Notes: I really spent more time world building than I should have. Every scene in this fic takes place in a larger fictional world that is now outside my control. I decided to narrow the focus of my fic when I realized what a monster I created! I need an escape rope quick! Anyone!
Awesome People: Chloe is a precious cinnamon bun and deserves all the thanks in the world. I couldn’t have gotten through this fic without your beta suggestions and encouragement. Zelinxia is also a precious cinnamon bun and the most enthusiastic cheerleader anyone could ask for. Thank you so much!
Summary: To come


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Notes: Edited to include a link to a cleaner version on my page where I fixed html problems. I am sorry for those who had to look at that formatted mess before.

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[badluck_koi]

Thank you. I was very worried that my story would be too disjointed to even enjoy a little. I think this was the worse planning I had for the Olympics. I wrote more to the story and more scenes. When the deadline loomed closer, I kind of realized that I tried to wrangle in too much for a story, but I wanted to give a small bit of it. I am glad I was able to do that much. Even now, this is pretty much half the story I wanted to cover with the bar, and I am still writing part 2. I hope I can deliver more soon and fix a lot of problems.

The font is ugly as hell ;___;. I had html problems. It was late when I posted so I was way too done with livejournal code. Asked Clover about it and I might have had this problem because I copied from word on to rtf and it does weird things with your code. I think I can just retry posting another cleaner version on my timeline and hope it doesn't mess up. This is a legitimate criticism an ugly format can affect the aesthetic of a story and make it less enjoyable.

Thanks again for showing interest. I know I might have been better off stepping down considering I had a lot going on, but I am very stubborn.

About the flashback. I am really sorry for the confusion. I wrote the beginning when I planned on pulling out of the flashback. It's all in flashback... which now makes no sense because considering practically the whole story takes place around that time, it isn't needed. That probably should have been changed and I should have started with the ship docking and ended at the bar.

I hope it doesn't sound like I am making excuses.