1. How in-character was this fic? 9.5 While he was not the focus of the story, I felt that Touya was pretty aggressive (though perhaps mostly justified in the world and context). Everyone else seemed incredibly in-character. I loved how much Kurogane said without actually using words.
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 8 There was a lot of sea related stuff going on but I felt like the 20,000 leagues under was missing. I would have liked the under the sea aspect of the prompt to be stressed more. I also felt that the Team Light aspect was missing from the story.
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 9 I felt that there was something missing but I can't figure out what it is. The ending also seemed a bit off with the context of the rest of the story but everything else flowed really well. I loved the story anyway. I’m always a sucker for steampunk and pirates so it was super cool to read a story with them combined.
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While he was not the focus of the story, I felt that Touya was pretty aggressive (though perhaps mostly justified in the world and context). Everyone else seemed incredibly in-character. I loved how much Kurogane said without actually using words.
2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 8
There was a lot of sea related stuff going on but I felt like the 20,000 leagues under was missing. I would have liked the under the sea aspect of the prompt to be stressed more. I also felt that the Team Light aspect was missing from the story.
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 9
I felt that there was something missing but I can't figure out what it is. The ending also seemed a bit off with the context of the rest of the story but everything else flowed really well. I loved the story anyway. I’m always a sucker for steampunk and pirates so it was super cool to read a story with them combined.
Thank you so much for writing this fic!