[Team Light] (20,000 Leagues Under the Sea) The King and the Albatross

[arisprite]

 Title: The King and the Albatross
Prompt: 20,000 Leagues Under the Sea
Rating: Teen and up
Warnings: Canon-typical violence, some unsettling imagery, and description of drowning, apparent character death.


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Comments

[miyakodea]

1. How in-character was this fic? 9.5
While he was not the focus of the story, I felt that Touya was pretty aggressive (though perhaps mostly justified in the world and context). Everyone else seemed incredibly in-character. I loved how much Kurogane said without actually using words.

2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? 8
There was a lot of sea related stuff going on but I felt like the 20,000 leagues under was missing. I would have liked the under the sea aspect of the prompt to be stressed more. I also felt that the Team Light aspect was missing from the story.

3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 9
I felt that there was something missing but I can't figure out what it is. The ending also seemed a bit off with the context of the rest of the story but everything else flowed really well. I loved the story anyway. I’m always a sucker for steampunk and pirates so it was super cool to read a story with them combined.

Thank you so much for writing this fic!