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kageyambae ([personal profile] mindlessadri) wrote in [community profile] kurofai2016-08-11 11:02 am

[Team Light] (Fools Rush In) Kaleidoscopes

Title: Kaleidoscopes
Prompt: Fools rush in where angels fear to tread
Rating: T+
Warnings: Injury; not shown in a graphic capacity
I went with a very literal interpretation with the prompt. The story focuses around making rash decisions and their outcomes.
 
~the end.

 
 
 
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[personal profile] haezofdaust 2016-09-02 06:52 pm (UTC)(link)
1. How in-character was this fic? (1-10)
10

2. How well did this fic handle the prompt? (1-10)
9

3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? (1-10)
10

Oh. This fic hits like a sledgehammer. It's so honest, real, and human, and it comes with such powerful moments. Loved the themes that ran throughout and the heavy, poignant mood of it all. It's hauntingly, beautifully written and I'm not ready to get off this wild train ride of a fic yet.