[Fanfic] Not Quite Paradise (Kuro/Fai/Yuui, R) 18/?

[reikah]

I don't think we've posted this here before, probably because it's K/F/Y rather than K/F - but so far there's very little K/F/Y and a lot more K/F and F/Y, so let's give it a shot!

Title: Not Quite Paradise [18/?; ongoing]
Pairing: Fai/Kurogane/Yuui
Author: Co-write between mikkeneko & reikah
Rating: R
Word count: 10,711 this chapter (117,121 total)
Notes: "In a future where science and psionics rule the skies, and both are controlled by the iron fist of the Earth government, two young men make a desperate leap into the unknown in order to evade capture and slavery. AU, Kurogane/Yuui/Fai."

The master post of previous chapters

( "Just so you know, throwing tantrums and ordering me around isn't doing much to change my mind." )

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[mikkeneko]

Reikah wanted to get right back in the saddle, after the Olympics. I would have been perfectly happy to sit around wasting my life and not writing. :P

Yuui is doing his best, trying to deal with Fai and everything else at the same time, but he's really not coping as well as he thinks. ^^; Instead he's put himself into this martyr mentality where he has to suffer for Fai's own sake, never thinking about the fact that he's really not helping Fai by fucking himself up like this! Plus, Yuui/Fai ALWAYS finds a way to run away, wherever they are. XD

...is it mean to say that I'm always happy when readers don't immediately guess what my foreshadowing is hinting at? XD It would be boring if it were too obvious!

Thanks for reading and commenting :)