[Team Comedy] (Rule 63) Be My Dangerous Girl

[cloverfield]

Title: Be My Dangerous Girl
Prompt: Rule 63
Rating: M, for swearing and violence and sassmouth.
Warnings: Lots of instances of the word 'fuck', and quite a bit of violence in the middle; if you're triggered easily, please tread carefully.
Author's notes: GENDERSWAP IS SO FUN YOU GUYS, OMG. I HOPE YOU HAVE AS MUCH FUN READING THIS AS I DID WRITING IT. I've posted it over at my dw for convenience, but please vote here for the sake of the mods!

It all started -as the workweek usually does- on a Monday morning.

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[cloverfield]

/blushes with the fire of a thousand suns

Ahahaha, I'm so happy you liked it! I had an amazing time writing this fic, seriously, and fem!Fai basically ruled my world for the three weeks and a bit it took me to write this. I must admit, I was channelling my inner customer-service-snark from my past life as a shop jockey there, and sassy Hokuto may or may not have a good dash of a close friend of mine, who upon betareading this declared that Hokuto was him and he was Hokuto. XD And sexy-badass-Kuro-lady is my favourite, oh yes. How could I not put her in a red dress and have her kick arse? XD

1: I'm really happy I pulled off the characterisation. It's tricky in AUs, because they haven't had the same experiences and thus aren't the same characters, but they are the same characters, so I'm happy I managed to pull that off for you to find them believeable :D

2: Genderbending is fun! But as this was my first time writing it, I was worried how I might do with it- but it was definitely worth trying and I'm pleased that I managed to pull it off. That you felt like they were always women and you had always read them as such was such a big compliment for me- thank you! And I'm so relieved I could make it funny! ^^;;

3: I'm so, so happy you enjoyed this so much. I had a blast writing it, so it gives me the :DDDDs that you had a blast reading it. Thanks so much for reading and voting!