[Team Drama] (Rule 63) Her eyes you'll remember

[zelinxia]

Title: Her eyes you'll remember
Prompt: Rule 63
Rating: M
Warnings: Violence, torture towards the end, and a short sex scene
Author's Note: Apparently can never write something short for a fem!KuroFai fanfic. Oh well. With that said, I'm done, whoo!

Prologue | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Epilogue
~the end.

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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

Hey!

I can wholeheartedly say that I loved the premise of this piece. It was intriguing and just alkjlsrkgj it was awesome. I was honestly taken aback about the transgender bits; maybe I'm just close minded, but that hadn't crossed my mind when I saw the prompt, so kudos to you!

Also, heh. "Kurogane Suwa, Licensed Private Detective of Hawk Vision: Private Eye Agency. Need a professional eye? PD Suwa’s your eye... With vision like a hawk, PD Suwa never fails on your case." I snorted and woke up my house mates.

How in-character was this fic? 8
2. How well did this fic handle the trope? 10
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 9.5

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[(Anonymous)]

Whoops.

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[zelinxia]

Well to be honest, majority of Rule 63 fan works are cis-swaps: cis male to cis female, or vice versa. The media we consume and build rarely feature trans characters - and if they do they are negative and stereotypical. In general, we assume everybody is cis unless stated otherwise, which is not great. I love writing Fai and Kurogane as cis women, and I have several times. So now it was time that I wrote them as trans people - trans women in this case. I hope to write more of them and others as trans in the future!

I am not sorry for making you wake up your house mates, not at all. It was one of my top favorite things to write, cause Kurogane literally has the power to see and know. You know, I just realized with her new airborne Locating powers, she truly has hawk eyes now!

So happy you enjoyed it! Thank YOU for reading and voting! It is very appreciated. :D