[Team Drama] (Rule 63) Her eyes you'll remember

[zelinxia]

Title: Her eyes you'll remember
Prompt: Rule 63
Rating: M
Warnings: Violence, torture towards the end, and a short sex scene
Author's Note: Apparently can never write something short for a fem!KuroFai fanfic. Oh well. With that said, I'm done, whoo!

Prologue | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Epilogue
~the end.

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Comments

[mindlessadri]

1. How in-character was this fic? 9
2. How well did this fic handle the trope? 10
3. How much did you enjoy this fic overall? 7.5 (I just remember reading like these whole long areas of exposition that were just like piles and piles of information and I had to stop reading for a bit just to get through it. Plus I've just honestly enjoyed other fics you've written more.)

[zelinxia]

I appreciate your honesty. Would you mind recalling which parts of expositions felt long-winded for you? (I'm assuming one of them is the history of Yuuka-ku.) Sometime this summer I'm going to do a massive revision because I know this fic can be better.

Thanks for scoring!