[Team Machines] Backpfeifengesich: Salvage (for Kuroganeattacksquad)

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Title: Salvage


Prompt: Backpfeifengesich: A face badly in need of a fist


Rating: M

Tags: Sexual scenarios implied, nudity, murder, death, character death, death of a child, death of a god, war, suicide, suicidal thoughts, violence, depression, religion (fantastical), nationalism, imperialism, alcoholism, blasphemy (fantastical), coarse language, power structures, manipulative power structures, abandonment, smoking, hunting, dead animals, child soldiers

I'm really excited to participate in another year of the KuroFai Olympics!! Let's go Team Machines!! A big thank you to all the mods for setting this up and being very patient with me! And thank you to everyone who's reading!

Yes, the lake with cabin was inspired by Spring, Summer, Fall, Winter... and Spring

Let's get started~

( First, Tomoyo sent Sorata. His fighting was a planned mess, taking up more space than he needed. Half his swings were just to take down trees, to make room for his theatrical spins and jumps. It took just five minutes for Kurogane to dispatch him. Then, she sent Arashi, a young beauty, more reserved than the first and with better mastery of the blade. This battle was longer, with fast, sharp movements that tried Kurogane's footwork. After he had sliced her through, he thought that maybe he had gotten rusty. He would have to train harder, to prepare for whomever was next. After many battles that always left him the victor, one morning, Kurogane banked his boat to find Tomoyo. )

~the end.


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