[Team Drama] (Rule 63) Her eyes you'll remember

[zelinxia]

Title: Her eyes you'll remember
Prompt: Rule 63
Rating: M
Warnings: Violence, torture towards the end, and a short sex scene
Author's Note: Apparently can never write something short for a fem!KuroFai fanfic. Oh well. With that said, I'm done, whoo!

Prologue | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Epilogue
~the end.

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Comments

[zelinxia]

My pleasure to write this. Thank you for reading and scoring!

I always have fun coming up with parallels compliant to the AU. Personally my favorite for this fic is creating a scenario where Syaoran was forced to betray Fai. If it wasn't for Sakura's safety at stake, they wouldn't have told Seishirou about her whereabouts.

World-building! I will incorporate more of the world and the nitty gritty details when I work on heavy revision for this fic. I've been asking everyone who's left constructive criticism for more feedback, so I'd like to ask you the same. Were there any aspects of this world you wish you knew about?

[princehircine]

I was really interested in the magic of this world and its classifications, how it is perceived and dealt with, how it affects the world as a whole.
And of course the history of the underground could certainly be expanded upon. But then again, that could be material for a whole different story! I don't know if you could add more backstory to this one without straying too far off topic, but maybe you could find a way to do it!