[Team Drama] (Rule 63) Her eyes you'll remember

[zelinxia]

Title: Her eyes you'll remember
Prompt: Rule 63
Rating: M
Warnings: Violence, torture towards the end, and a short sex scene
Author's Note: Apparently can never write something short for a fem!KuroFai fanfic. Oh well. With that said, I'm done, whoo!

Prologue | Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4 | Epilogue
~the end.

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Comments

[princehircine]

I was really interested in the magic of this world and its classifications, how it is perceived and dealt with, how it affects the world as a whole.
And of course the history of the underground could certainly be expanded upon. But then again, that could be material for a whole different story! I don't know if you could add more backstory to this one without straying too far off topic, but maybe you could find a way to do it!